July 29, 2008
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[short] Writing Assignment #3
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Assignment #3: Write a great first line.
It was during his two thousand three hundred and eighty third life time that Yars Eleran finally gave up on the world.
Comments (6)
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This is my favorite one so far…
This almost sounds like either something from Dune (the original, not the crappy Sci-Fi channel remake) or the funky British lady monologue in that Will Ferrell movie “Stranger than Fiction”. Nicely done.
Oh man, I’m a sucker for fantasy/sci-fi. I’m sure I would read this.
Don’t you think he might have been rushing it?
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Many thanks for this.