August 12, 2008
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[short] Writing Assignment #6
Assignment #6: Write a great last paragraph.
It was over of course. They stood on a cliff facing the valley of the gods. He turned and looked at each of their faces illuminated by
the light of the last of the dying star towers. Kaily. Niyel. Melina.
Chrey. Javid. Faces he now knew better than his own. His friends who
had been with him through it all. No, more than friends now. They had
become his family. A truer family than any of those with whom he was
related by blood. And now they were fading as he was fading away from
the world they had fought so hard to create. There was not a tear in
any of their eyes. They were united in their resolve to see this thing
through to the end whatever the consequences. And now they would face
those consequences bravely. Together. They had done what they could.
Their little family had paved the way. From now on it was up to their
children to build the future.
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Comments (1)
Hmmm… I like it. It makes me wish that I knew the rest of the story… It’s a bit confusing, but I don’t really think that matters, because I assume that it would make perfect sense if one had read the story.
Kudos